Revision Plan Essays - Writing, Paragraph, Typography,

Dr.Cottrill ENG-101 30 January 2015 Revision Plan Peer Review Suggestions oConsider my title oToo many run-on sentences oFocus more on my thesis oDevelop my stance and key points in the supporting paragraphs oSharpen your conclusion Instructor Comments Global oMy purpose is not clearly stated oMy Reasons are unclear oCould use more examples oMy argument is not supported properly oNot focused on topic during the body paragraphs Local oStarting sentences with Conjunctions oRun-on Sentences oSentence Fragments oNeed a header with page numbers 5 steps Im Taking in Revision 1)State my purpose and argument clearly in the thesis 2)Support it with universal reasons 3)Rearrange or remove off topic run-on sentences 4)Identify and connect to my audience 5)End with supportive reasons in my conclusion